You the cause of my tearsمن تأليفي

You the cause of my tears

In the past when I go to sleep I see nice dream but now I see night mare in the past I be beard in the cages but now I fly with out wings I very happy now and the cause is leave you
My eyes clouds rain tears and the cause is you
If you don’t love me why you say that
But now my tears are the color of rain bow and the cause you far
My sky's sun shining
And my heart being brave
And I wrote my story with you in the sand because I wait the love wind to wish it

شكرا روعه

ويعطيجـ العافيهـ ع الشعر المميز,,

لاعدمناجـ,,,

شكرا على ردودكم

منورين

العـــــــــفو ...

الله يعافيج

wooooooooow
thank you so much
it's fantastic
we are waiting for your new poem

Really , without any courtesy
. it's great .

The words have a wonderful arrangement

. be side the strength of the meaning .

There is a great taste for the expression. Well done .

You were lucky in your choice of the words .
every word has some thing make it different than the other one . in my opinion , i think that the text is a miracle .
you have a great gift so,, don’t keep it for your self ,, share it with us ..
with my all respect I thank you .

Oh!!!! you are lucky candy girl
rym has the innovation for her replys in English tooooooooo

congratulations candy, rym give you wich all members can't give it to you

You the cause of my tearsمن تأليفي Jewelsfasel6

that's because you are tastefulness Amira ..

your talk amira is right
thank you reem to encouragment me
with your encouragment i write better words
thanks for reem and amira
and for every one in come in this topic

You the cause of my tearsمن تأليفي Www_7oob_net_28

you are welcome sis
that words were just the truth
i didn't do any thing more than writing my opinion

you are welcome candy girl

thank you

مشكوورهـ ع الشعر

و انت ايضا مشكووووورة للمرور

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